Sensory Awareness

The writing spark for this piece was Sensory Highlights. Here’s is my take on that.

Sensory Awareness

We all have five senses

At least that’s what they say

They tell you in school

You use all every day

Sight for your eyes and your nose handles smell

Your ears let you hear, and your mouth tastes so well

Whole body claims touch. That all. But they lied

I claim there are more. Here’s a list. You decide.

 

There are things to accomplish. There are things you must do.

It’s your sense of purpose that will carry you through.

 

Your house is on fire or you just cut your hand

It’s your sense of urgency. Just don’t sit there and stand

 

There’s a mountain to climb. There’s a river to ford.

It’s your sense of adventure. Go pull that ripcord

 

You are clever and witty. You can tell a good joke.

It’s your good sense of humor. Makes you one happy bloke

 

You fight for what’s right. You protect those in need.

It’s your sense of duty. Such an honorable breed

 

You turn in when due. You catch the last train

It’s your good sense of timing. That’s using your brain.

 

You flow with the music. You clap to the beat

Your good sense of rhythm is always a treat

 

Those are a few – of the senses I share

Though the one we use most,

has become rather rare

For you see it’s quite common,

And here I must tell

It takes thinking, good judgement, to use it quite well

Common Sense’s what they call it.

They are many who choose

Not to use it at all. And for that we might lose.

What we’ve built, what we have, all the freedoms we need

To sustain our existence, all because of their greed

 

So schools hear my warning. Don’t teach our kids wrong

Start with listening and thinking, That shouldn’t take long.

Then the five senses, just to mention a few.

Use them all with each other; get a logical view

Then people can preach, they can put up a fight

But we’ll use learned thought to determine what’s right

“Common sense is not so common,” Voltaire once said.

Time to prove he was wrong, or we’ll all end up  ______.

About hdh

I have been telling stories for over 40 years and writing forever. I am a retired teacher and storyteller. I hope to expand upon my repertoire and use this blog as a place to do writing. The main purpose is to give me and others that choose to comment, a space in which to play with issues that deal with storytelling, storytelling ideas, storytelling in education, reactions to events, and just plain fun stories. I explore some of my own writing throughout, from character analysis, to fictional, to poetry, and personal stories. I go wherever my muse sends me. Enjoy!
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